Article The Steps Experiment
Summary: The script of Jerzy Kosinski’s award-winning novel Steps was submitted under a false name to fourteen different publishers, all of whom rejected it.
Artwork accompanying Ross’s 1979 article describing the Steps Experiment. In 1975 Chuck Ross was selling cable TV door-to-door, and dreaming of becoming a writer. However, he felt the odds were stacked against him since the publishing industry seemed incapable of recognizing talent. To prove his theory, he typed up twenty-one pages of a highly acclaimed book and sent it unsolicited to four publishers (Random House, Houghton Mifflin, Doubleday, and Harcourt Brace Jovanovich), claiming it was his own work. The work he chose for this experiment was Steps, by Jerzy Kosinski. It had won the National Book Award for Fiction in 1969 and by 1975 had sold over 400,000 copies. All four publishers rejected the work, including Random House, who was its original publisher.
When Ross described this experiment in Harper’s Bookletter (now defunct), his methodology was criticized. George Plimpton argued that his cover letter sounded too casual. (It started off with “Hello.") Kosinski himself argued that Ross should have typed and sent the entire manuscript. He wrote, “It [Steps] depends very much on cumulative effect. I can see myself rejecting it… It would have been much more interesting if he had submitted the whole work… I’ve never submitted a fragment of my work to anyone.”
To address this criticism, Ross repeated the experiment in 1979. This time he submitted the entire book to fourteen publishers (the original four plus The Atlantic Monthly Press; Farrar, Straus & Giroux; Harper & Row; Alfred A. Knopf; Seymour Lawrence; David McKay; Macmillan; William Morrow; Prentic-Hall; and Viking). He also used the pseudonym Erik Demos, in case someone recognized his name from the earlier experiment.
Again, every publisher rejected the work. Harcourt Brace Jovanovich, publisher of Kosinski’s Being There, commented, “While your prose style is very lucid, the content of the book didn’t inspire the level of enthusiasm here that a publisher should have for any book on their list in order to do well by it.” Houghton Mifflin, publisher of Kosinski’s The Painted Bird, wrote:
Several of us read your untitled novel here with admiration for writing and style. Jerzy Kosinski comes to mind as a point of comparison when reading the stark, chilly episodic incidents you have set down. The drawback to the manuscript, as it stands, is that it doesn’t add up to a satisfactory whole. It has some very impressive moments, but gives the impression of sketchiness and incompleteness.
Ross commented that, “Evidently, Kosinski is not as good as Kosinski when Demos is the name on the envelope.”
Next Ross sent queries to twenty-six literary agents. Again, no agent offered to represent him. Ross wrote that, “no one, neither publishers nor agents, recognized Kosinski’s already published book. Even more disappointing was the fact that no one thought it deserved to see print.”
Controversy
Some have criticized Ross’s choice of Steps, suggesting that it is easy to understand how publishers could have rejected it. M.A.Orthofer has written,
Steps is a different beast from The Painted Bird. It won the National Book Award—controversially, one might add, with many considering it a make-up prize for the previously overlooked The Painted Bird—and it sold well. It may be of literary merit, it may have won a prestigious prize, many people may have bought it and a considerable number might even have read it, but it made no impression. It is not a bad book, but it is entirely unremarkable. A book the world has remained oblivious to. Fairly, rightly so. It has been reduced to a curious aside, an occasional footnote, a bibliographic entry. It is already among the most-forgotten books of recent years, and it will fade further. And Chuck Ross’ clever success rests on this particular quality of the book—rests entirely on it, one could argue.
The Painted Bird belongs in another category entirely. It was more widely discussed, and far better known. It made Kosinski’s reputation, and it remains the most significant of his texts. A number of his works are still in print, but this is the big one. The magnum opus, the one that’s cited when he is mentioned. Ross’ ruse would never have worked had he submitted The Painted Bird, retyped, in his experiment. Fake or real, it is a unique text. It made its mark. It was widely read, well received. It is a familiar, known novel. It stands out, in whatever guise it exists. Arguably even those that have not read the original would recognize it were it submitted under a different title and a different author’s name. Not necessarily as The Painted Bird, but as as an element of our common literary and humanistic experience, a fact which would be remarked upon and followed through until the connection with the original novel was made. In part this is due to the subject-matter, but The Painted Bird is also an accomplished and distinctive literary text (as none of Kosinski’s other novels are—though a number are quite interesting).
Perhaps Steps was an easy case. However, the same could not be said of Ross’s next experiment, in which he submitted the script of Casablanca to 200 movie agents.
A final irony of the Steps experiment was that Kosinski was later accused of literary fraud. It was alleged that in writing his books he both relied on ghostwriters and extensively plagiarized from others.
See Also
• Spurious Submission Hoaxes
• Casablanca Rejected
References
- Orthofer, M.A. (February, 2001). “Facts and Fakes: Considering Eliot Weinberger’s Genuine Fakes.” Complete Review Quarterly. II(1).
- Ross, Chuck. (February 12, 1979). “Rejected.” New West. 4(4): 39-43.